Welcome to my learning portfolio. I go to Burnham School - Te Kura o Tiori. This portfolio shows some of the work I am most proud of. Please join me and give me some positive feedback.
Wednesday, 29 May 2013
Monday, 20 May 2013
100WC
Today I went grieving to the future. Wow that view it is amazing then suddenly I looked out the window and I saw it was a big ugly there were three gouged together can we go there I asked my dad well said dad that would be
fine so he parked the car and I raced out of my seat and we went to have a look wow I even saw my grandad there I ran to give him an amazing hug cause I have never seen him in 36 years. He told me what he did as a job and what that big igloo was and it was exactly right all three igloos gouged together yes I was perfectly right my grandad took us inside. Wow it was amazing there were 14 couches 15 kitchens 17 bed rooms. It was amazing then it was time to go I gave him a huge hug and me and my dad walked happily to the car and grove away home. Wow I really miss grandad but I am so happy I got to see him. Anyway what a lovely adventure.
From Emma.
fine so he parked the car and I raced out of my seat and we went to have a look wow I even saw my grandad there I ran to give him an amazing hug cause I have never seen him in 36 years. He told me what he did as a job and what that big igloo was and it was exactly right all three igloos gouged together yes I was perfectly right my grandad took us inside. Wow it was amazing there were 14 couches 15 kitchens 17 bed rooms. It was amazing then it was time to go I gave him a huge hug and me and my dad walked happily to the car and grove away home. Wow I really miss grandad but I am so happy I got to see him. Anyway what a lovely adventure.
From Emma.
Wednesday, 8 May 2013
100wc
...suddenly the pain in my arm
It was the day I went on a mysterious mystery I was running away from a scorpion with my Dad when suddenly I saw the perfect idea. It was a magnificent bee! I shouted out to my Dad,"Dad our only chance is to jump onto that humungous bee". My Dad said back that's a great idea"So when we got closer we pounced onto the big bee.but,suddenly up again came the scorpion and bite us ten times on the arm. "Ow!" We screamed suddenly the pain in my arm became unbearable.
From Emma.
It was the day I went on a mysterious mystery I was running away from a scorpion with my Dad when suddenly I saw the perfect idea. It was a magnificent bee! I shouted out to my Dad,"Dad our only chance is to jump onto that humungous bee". My Dad said back that's a great idea"So when we got closer we pounced onto the big bee.but,suddenly up again came the scorpion and bite us ten times on the arm. "Ow!" We screamed suddenly the pain in my arm became unbearable.
From Emma.
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