The strong wind blew my shiny pink hat flying.The grumbling made lightning flash and thunder crash.The lightning strike picked me up and threw me over the big bright city. I went for a walk through the the hard cold hail. The lightning flashed when it struck in midnight air.
Thank you for your 5 sentence challenge Emma, I really enjoyed reading it. Some of your word choices are excellent, I especially like 'grumbling' and 'flashed.' These types of words help me to imagine the storm you are writing about more easily. It feel like I am there! You have also used lots of adjectives too which is great. Next time to make your writing even more exciting to read you could use different words to start your sentences.
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